The glass – exquisite.
The drink – virgin.
clouding your vision.
Welcome to the new page 3,
but hey, that's on page 1.
The glass – sculpted.
The drink – dark.
The murmuring’s senseless,
and their tone’s judgemental.
Their looks are scornful,
but do they even care?
The glass – clear
The drink – cola.
the girl next door.
To them you are nothing,
but an alcoholic par none.
11 comments:
ipo ennangra?
ponnu thanni adchaala illiya?adhe poato poatu kaatu..ipdi kavidhalaam venaam..
ina?seryaa?
-Raapi
Raapi: Thats besides the point!
puriliyae da ....
-Prabhu
Do not judge a drunkard by the shape of the glass..
prabhu,
i think he is giving a commentary on the person depending on what glas she holds. i may be wrong. it is difficult to understand though..
so ill wait for the ERC (if there is one)
remember the post on blog day...i said some of ur posts goes well above my head...this one is a classic example...
Pasangala, puriyalai na vittudungalen ;) Naan Thiruvilayadal la Dharmi maadhiri. Kadavula vandhu "indhaaaa" nu kudutha kavidhaiya dhaan naan sonnen.. Adukku vilakkam kettu en enna torture pannareenga. :)) Kastapattu, manasula vandha varthaigala kavidhaiya kottina, rasika ma, aarayareenga :p
Jokes apart, it deals with the follies of making judgements based on what you just SEE like the recent Park Hotel party case! Have heard so many ppl (incl. a few bloggers) passing judgement on the gals in the pics and don't like it. First of all, its personal choice. Secondly none of us is Mr. Good Guy ourselves. If we say someone is a threat to our culture, we should stop and ask ourselves whether, by our own culture yardstick, we ourselves qualify as caretakers!
As for the format, trying for the first time to write something like this. Was trying to structure it in some form that's consistent and hence the words might have come across as confusing!
Hmmm...It seems to go down well till I hit the last para. Doesn't quite work for me that bit.
Good spin and good topic! :)
Gabby: First attempt. So excooos... Btw, do you know the crux of the issue? It's stupid!
"Pasangala, puriyalai na vittudungalen ;) Naan Thiruvilayadal la Dharmi maadhiri. Kadavula vandhu "indhaaaa" nu kudutha kavidhaiya dhaan naan sonnen.. Adukku vilakkam kettu en enna torture pannareenga. :)) Kastapattu, manasula vandha varthaigala kavidhaiya kottina, rasika ma, aarayareenga :p"
Ippidi koovinadhum naerla Antiji aa paatha madiri oru feeling :)
Anu: :D
Sorry... comments late a paathen..
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